高考英语高分作文四要素

高考英语作文高分&ldquo;四要素&rdquo;<br />书面表达高分作文要求：<br />1. 覆盖了所有的要点 2. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇<br /> 3. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑<br /> 4. 语言得体<br />要素一： 内容完整 、相关<br />备考策略：列提纲、写主题句<br />题目：中央号召创建节约型社会，可是许多校园内部浪费现象严重。请你在班会上发表演讲，<br />号召同学们从我做起，杜绝浪费。<br />提示： 1、浪费现象：水、电、餐厅的食物及其他；<br /> 2、危害:自身性格，父母财政负担，自然资源；<br /> 3、制止浪费现象的措施：由自己设想。<br />要求：1、词数 120 左右；演讲的开头和结尾已写好,不记入总词数。<br /> 2、不要逐字逐条翻译，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。<br />How can we organize the passage?<br />Para.1<br />Para.2 <br />Para.3 <br />要素二： 行文连贯，结构严谨<br />备考策略：正确使用过渡语<br /> <br />表__________ and，both&hellip;and，as well as，as well, also, neither&hellip;nor，or，either&hellip;or <br />表__________ besides, furthermore, likewise, moreover, not only&hellip;,but also&hellip;, for one thing&hellip;for <br />another, what’s more/worse, worse still<br />表__________ however, while, but, yet, still, in spite of, despite, on the contrary, on one hand&hellip;, <br />on the other hand, nevertheless<br />表__________ for example, such as, in other words, as a matter of fact, in fact, actually, that is to <br />say,<br />表__________ therefore, thus, hence, otherwise, thanks to..., due to..., owe&hellip;to, consequently, <br />accordingly, as a result, for the reason that&hellip;, so that<br />表__________ personally speaking, in my opinion, as far as I am concerned/ know, as we all know, <br />As far as I can see&hellip;, It seems to me that&hellip;/ from my point of view&hellip;<br />表__________ in a word, in short, in brief, as has been stated, as I have shown, We can safely <br />draw a conclusion that&hellip;, all in all, on the whole<br />表__________ first, second, third, last/firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally/the first, the second, the <br />third, the last/in the first place, in the second place, in the third place, lastly/to begin <br />with, then, furthermore, finally/to start with, next, finally/first and foremost, last <br />but not least, most important of all<br />表__________ first, then, later, in the end, eventually, since then, after a while, at last<br /> 请为下面两段话加上合适的过渡语：<br />1、The bad habit of being wasteful will have a bad effect on their own character. It adds financial <br />burden to their parents. The world’s limited natural resources will be used up.<br />2、We should have a clear awareness of the serious situation. We should educate the students to form <br />the good habit. We should start with ourselves and take the lead in reducing the waste to save <br />everything. <br /> <br />要素三：语言得体<br />备考策略：1、避免汉式英语<br />Translate：保持平常心。keep a normal heart.(╳)<br />→Keep a normal state of mind. /Keep an easy mind. /Take it easy.<br />Correct the mistakes:<br />1） Someone could hardly receive the result. So they lose their heart.<br />2）We should find out our poor points in our studies and throw them away.<br />3） I think we should think more good thinks.<br />4）They dare not raise their heads before the other students.<br />5）Through tra...