高考英语作文满分技巧记叙文

写作指导 (6)<br />　 记叙文<br />1．记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物发展变化<br />的过程为主的一种文体。<br />2．在记叙文体的高考书面表达中，命题形式主<br />要是提纲式或图画式。<br />3．通常要求考生以第一人称或第三人称来写作，<br />第一人称主要是写自己的经历，第三人称主要是<br />写他人的经历或事迹。<br />4．由于记叙文叙述的事情通常发生在过去，因<br />而，其时态主要用一般过去时。<br />5．记叙文通常是按照事情发生的先后顺序来表<br />达内容的。<br />下面四幅图片描述的是李明和爷爷从养鸟到放<br />鸟的一段经历。请根据图片所提供的信息以第三<br />人称的口吻用英语写一篇短文。<br /> <br />注意：1.短文必须包括所有图片的主要内容，内<br />容要连贯、完整；<br />2．词数：100 左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词<br />数。<br />案例分析⊙<br />由题目要求可知，要求考生以记叙文的形式进行<br />描述，即李明的爷爷从养鸟到放鸟整件事情的经<br />过。既为经过，说明事情已经发生，当然要用一<br />般过去时，人称要用第三人称。至于写作顺序，<br />从图片的安排次序可知应从养鸟到放鸟，即事情<br />发生的先后顺序来写。另外，英语写作也不像平<br />常的语文写作，词数的要求(按 100 词左右)限制<br />了较复杂写作手法的使用。<br /> <br />One Sunday morning ，Li Ming and his grandpa <br />were feeding the bird in the cage.The bird was <br />unhappy though it had enough food and water.Li <br />Ming did not know why.<br />The next morning on his way to school，Li Ming <br />saw some birds flying in the sky.Then he thought <br />of the lonely bird in the cage.He decided to <br />persuade his grandpa to set the bird free.When he <br />got home，he said to his grandpa，“Birds also need <br />friends！” To his delight，his grandpa agreed.<br />The bird was set free.Grandpa and the children <br />were very happy to see the bird flying away into <br />the sky.<br />某英语报刊的一个栏目以“谈谈发生在身边的故<br />事”为主题展开征文活动。你校最近举办了一场<br />校运会，请你讲述在校运会期间发生在李华同学<br />身上的一件感人的事。根据下列图片，描述事情<br /> <br />的经过并简单发表你的看法。<br />注意：1.词数：100 左右。文章的标题和开头已<br />给出，不计入总词数；<br />2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；<br />3．参考词汇：勇气杯 Courage Cup。<br />Never Give Up<br />When Li Hua decided to take part in the 3,000-<br />metre race，everyone was very surprised.<br />_________________________________________<br />_______________________________<br />【参考答案】<br />Never Give Up<br /> <br />When Li Hua decided to take part in the 3,000-<br />metre race，everyone was very surprised.One of his <br />classmates said ，“Li Hua ， you are not strong <br />enough to run the 3,000 metres.”But Li Hua said，<br />“I don’t think I will win，but I’m determined to <br />finish it.”<br />During the race，each step seemed difficult for Li <br />Hua.Suddenly he fell，breaking his glasses and his <br />chance of winning the race.But he didn ’ t give <br />up.He stood up，put on his broken glasses and kept <br />on running.“Come on，Li Hua.You can do it！” <br />Everyone on the sports field was cheering for <br />him.Although Li Hua was the last one to cross the <br />finishing line ， he won the Courage Cup with <br />honor.<br />I was deeply touched by Li Hua’s great <br />determination.In my mind ， winning in life <br />shouldn’t be measured by the final score；it should <br />be based on how you play the game. <br /> <br />