2023年山东省济南市中考英语作文冲刺范文赏析

中考英语作文冲刺范文赏析（一）假定你是李华。你的新西兰朋友David对中医很感兴趣。请你结合以下图示，用英语写一封电子邮件。向你推荐即将在你校举办的"传统中医进校园"的宣传日活动，说明推荐理由，并请他关注线上相关信息。词数100词左右。注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名。DearDavid,I'mpleasuretoknowthatyou'reinterestedinChinesemedicine.____________________________________________________________________________________________________、【范文赏析】DearDavid,I'mpleasedtoknowthatyou'reinterestedinChinesemedicine.ThereisgoingtobeanactivityaboutChinesemedicine.Ithinkyoumaylikeit,sohereI'dliketointroducesomeinformationtoyou.Ifyouareinterested,youcanjoinit.TraditionalChineseMedicineDayisonDecember1st,2020.Therewillbemainlyaboutthreeprograms.ThefirstoneisatalkonChinesemedicine.Thesecondoneisashowaboutitsdevelopment.YoucanknowChinesemedicinebetterthroughthisshow.ThethirdistowatchthefilmLiShizhen,afamouspersoninChinesemedicinehistory.Ifyouwanttoknowmoredetailsabouttheactivity,hereistheaddress:www.intelschool.com.Hopethiscanhelpyou.Writetomesoon.Yours,LiHua（二）12学科网（北京）股份有限公司假如你是李华,是一名初中生。随着科技的发展,iPad已成为中学生的新宠。用iPad既可以听音乐,阅读纯文本电子书,又可以玩电子游戏。请你用英语给某英语报社写一篇短文,谈谈中学生使用iPad的利弊。短文内容必须包括以下几点:1.使用iPad对学习的好处;2.对课堂纪律和学习可能产生的负面影响;3.提出自己的建议并说明理由。注意:开头已经给出,不计入总数。词数100字左右。IsiPadGoodorBadforMiddleSchoolStudents?I’majuniormiddleschoolstudentnamedLiHua.NowmanystudentshaveiPadsandtheythinkit’safashiontousethem....【范文赏析】IsiPadgoodorbadformiddleschoolstudents？I’majuniorhighschoolstudentnamedLiHua.NowmanystudentshaveiPadsandtheythinkit’safashiontousethem.UsinganiPad,wecanlistentomusic,downloadalotoflearningmaterialsandreadthemonthescreen.Apparently,it’shelpfultoourstudy,especiallytoourEnglishlistening.Somestudents,however,bringtheiriPadstotheclassroomandlistentomusicwithoutearphones,whichmakestheteacherandotherstudentsgreatlyannoyed.Someofthemevenwasteprecioustimeinclassplayingvideogames.Inmyopinion,asstudents,weshouldmakegooduseofiPadstohelpachieveacademicsuccess.Theclassroomisaplaceforstudentstostudy,andthereforeconcentrationisawfullyneededforustolearnourlessons.Furthermore,theschoolshouldmakearuletoguidethestudentstouseiPadsinaproperway.（三）假如你是Ella,你们年级计划下个月组织一次赴四川贫困地区做志愿工作的活动。请根据以下要点提示向你的校长史密斯先生写一封请求信，阐明一下这次志愿者服务活动的相关内容以及你的感想。要求：100词左右，给出部分不计入总词数，可适当发挥。提示：1.活动时间及地点：下个月在四川贫困地区；2.活动目的：帮助孩子们并使他们振奋；3.活动内容：教孩子们唱歌，给孩子们讲故事，给他们传授不同的知识；4.你的请求。【范文赏析】DearMr.Smith,12学科网（北京）股份有限公司Wearewritingtoaskpermissionforavoluntaryworkactivity.Inordertohelpthechildreninpoorareasandraisetheirspirits,ourgradedecidestoorganizeavoluntaryactivityinSichuanProvincenextmonth.Weplantoteachthemtosingandtelltheminterestingstoriesabouttheoutsideworld.Wewillspendtwodayswiththem.Wewillalsoteachdifferentknowledgetothemsothattheycanhaveabetterunderstandingoftheworld.Inmyopinion,theactivityisverymeaningful.Couldyoupleasegiveuspermissiontohavetheactivity?Yoursincerely,Ella（四）随着网络的发展，人们消费观念转变，购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚，越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示，写一篇网上购物的文章。优点1.足不出户；节约时间；避免拥挤、劳累。2.价格通常比较便宜。3.可供选择的范围广，品种多。缺点1.只能看到图片，看不到商品本身。2.容易购买大量不太需要的东西，造成浪费。注意：1.所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面；2.100词左右，开头文章已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：网购shoppingonline;避免做某事avoiddoingsth;商品goods;导致cause【范文赏析】WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,manypeopleareusedtoshoppingonline.Ithasbecomeafashioninourdailylife.Someofusstudentsalsojointhegroup.Shoppingonlinehasmanyadvantages.Justbyaclickofthemouse,youcanbuywhatyou’reinterestedinwithoutgoingoutdoors.Youcanavoidgettingtiredandbeingtrappedinthecrowdedpeopleandcarsandsavetime.Whenshoppingonline,youcanchoosefrommorevarietiesofgoods,whosepricesaregenerallylower.Everycoinhastwosides.Itsdisadvantagesareobvious,too.Ontheonehand,it’sveryeasyforyoutobuygoodsdifferentfromthepicturesyouseeontheInternet.Ontheotherhand,shoppingonlinemaycausepeopletobuygoodsthatarenotbadlyneeded.That’sawasteofmoney.Allinall,Iloveshoppingonline.12学科网（北京）股份有限公司（五）生活节奏加快，竞争日益激烈，让大多数中学生在生活和学习上或多或少产生了压力，如何应对压力是大家不可回避的问题。为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题,你们班特意开展了一次以"LessPressure,BetterLife"为主题的英语演讲比赛,请你准备发言稿,谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法,与同学分享,内容包括:(1)同学们普遍存在的压力是什么;(2)我的压力是什么;(3)我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。注意:文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。词数100词左右。【范文赏析】LessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Pressureisaseriousproblemintoday’sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Somestudentscan’tgetonwellwiththeirclassmates,whileothersmayworryabouttheirexams.I’malwaysunderpressure,too.Myparentswantmetobethetopstudentinclass.Sotheysendmetoallkindsofafter-classesatweekends.LastMondayevening,Ihadatalkwithmymother.ItoldherIwasnotlazy.Ireallyfelttired.Ineededtimetorelax.Mymotheragreedwithmeatlast.SoIthinkaconversationwithparentsisnecessarytosolvetheproblem.That’sall.Thankyou!（六）假设你叫李华，你们市将要举行以“HowtoEatinaHealthyWay”为题的演讲比赛，请你准备写一篇演讲稿，内容包括：1.说明此次演讲的主题(howtoeatinahealthyway)。2.我们应该少吃、不吃及多吃的食物有哪些，并说明原因。3.描述自己的健康饮食习惯，并举例说明。4.希望大家都有个好的饮食习惯。作文要求：1）不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。2）语句连贯，词数100个左右(开头已给出)。HowtoEatinaHealthyWayHello,everybody.I'mLiHua.12学科网（北京）股份有限公司【范文赏析】HowtoEatinaHealthyWayHello,everybody.I'mLiHua.Mytopicishowtoeatinahealthyway.Firstly,weshouldnevereatfriedfoodorfoodswithlotsofsugarbecausetheyarenotgoodforhealth.Secondly,trytoeatmorevegetablesandfruit.Becausetheycanmakeusbecomemuchhealthier.Myeatinghabitsaregood.Forexample,Iofteneathealthyfoods,likefruit,eggs,vegetablesandmilkforbreakfastandrice,noodles,andvegetablesfordinner.Ihopeeveryonecaneatinahealthyway.（七）现在很多年轻人人喜欢在网络（如朋友圈或抖音）上分享自己的生活，请你写一篇短文来谈谈你对这一现象的看法。内容包括：1．通常人们在网上分享的内容有哪些？2．在网上分享自己生活的利与弊(各两点)。3．你自己的看法。作文要求：1．不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2．语句连贯，词数100个左右。【范文赏析】PeopleliketosharetheirlivesontheInternet.Theyalwayssharethetastyfoodtheyeat.Besides,theyputthephotosoftheirdailylifeontheInternet.Everycoinhastwosides.Sharingourlifemomentsonlinehasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Asfortheadvantages,sharinglivesontheInternetcanshowwhatyoulikeorcaretoeveryone.However,whilesurfingtheInternet,yourprivateinformationmaybestolenbybadpeople.Inconclusion,weshouldmakegooduseoftheInternetandmakesurewearesafewhileshowingourlives.（八）节约资源，保护环境，从身边的小事做起。作为一名学生，我们应该怎样看待“低碳”生活？请以“Mylow—carbonlife”为题写一篇短文，简述自己对“低碳”生活的理解及看法。100词左右。提示：1.步行或骑自行车上学；2.节约用水；12学科网（北京）股份有限公司3.不用塑料袋；4.节约用电；5.充分使用纸张。参考词汇：onfoot,turnoff,recycle,makefulluseof,plasticbag,tap【范文赏析】Mylow-carbonlifeNowthehumanlivingenvironmentisbecomingworseandworse.Soanewlifestylecalledlow-carbonlifeisspreadingtoeverypartofourcountry.Asmiddleschoolstudents,howcanwehavealow-carbonlife?Firstly,wecangotoschoolonfootorbybike.Secondly,weshouldn’twastewaterorelectricity.Doremembertoturnoffthelightswhenweleavetheroomandturnoffthetapintimeafterusingit.Thirdly,weshoulduseclothbagsinourdailylifeinsteadofplasticones.Fourthly,weshouldalsomakefulluseofpaper.We’dbetterrecyclesomeofourtextbooks.It’simportantforustolivealow-carbonlifetoprotecttheenvironment.（九）为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了以"安全为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。图片注意：1)内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥；　　　2)表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范；　　　3)词数100左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：becareful,online,danger,call...for,gobadHowtokeepsafe?Asteenagersweshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Buthowcanwekeepsafe?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First,...【范文赏析】Howtokeepsafe?Asteenagers,weshouldalwayskeepsafetyinmind.Buthowcanwekeepsafe?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.First,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Second,ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.Also,weoughttoeathealthilyandsafely.Eatingfoodthatgoesbadwilldoharmtoourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,summeris12学科网（北京）股份有限公司coming,andwemustrememberit'sdangeroustoswimintheriver.Inshort,safetymustcomefirst!（十）亲爱的同学，你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了，请你以“MyEnglishStudy”为题，谈一下三年来学习英语的心得体会。1.要点包括：你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的办法以及学习感悟。2.字数要求：不少于100字。【范文赏析】MyEnglishStudyHowtimeflies!Mythree-yearmiddleschoollifewillbeoversoon.Lookingback,IhavemanymemoriesofmyEnglishstudy.WhenIenteredthemiddleschool,IhadsomanydifficultieswithmyEnglish.Iwasnotabletounderstandtheteacherinclass,andIcouldn’tmasterthewordsandphrases.ForatimeIwantedtogiveitup.Later,withthehelpoftheteacherandmyclassmates,Ilistenedtotheteachercarefullyinclass,keptonreadingEnglisheverydayandspokeasmuchaspossible.StepbystepImadegreatprogressinEnglish.Inaword,onlywhenyoudevelopinterestinstudyingEnglishcanyoulearnitwell.（十一）随着网络的不断发展，传统的学习模式受到冲击。“网上学习(onlinelearning)”这一新的学习模式备受青睐。假设你是刘欣，最近某英文杂志正在讨论中学生是否应该通过网络进行在线学习。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况，请你给该报投稿，反映讨论结果并谈谈你自己的看法。提示：观点赞成(support)反对(against)理由1.网上资源丰富(befilledwithusefulresources)2.可以自由(free)选择学习内容和时间1.网上信息太多，有些不真实2.长时间用电脑对眼睛不好(bebadfor)自己的看法1.事物都有两面性(everycoinhastwosides)2.学生应该正确使用网络(usetheInternetproperly)注意：1.词数100以上，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信中不能出现真实的人名、地名。参考词汇：convenient(方便的)DearEditor,12学科网（北京）股份有限公司Recently,ourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsshouldlearnontheInternet.____________________________________________________________________________________【范文赏析】DearEditor,Recently,ourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhetherstudentsshouldlearnontheInternet.Somestudentssupportit.TheythinkonlinelearningismuchmoreconvenientandthattheInternetisfilledwithusefulresources.What’smore,learnersarefreetodecidewhatandwhentolearn.However,somestudentsareagainstit.Althoughtheythinkthere’salotofinformationontheInternet,someinformationisn’ttrue.Also,spendingalongtimesearchingforinformationonlineisbadfortheireyes.Inmyopinion,everycoinhastwosides.Ithinkit’sbettertouseboththetraditionalwayoflearningandonlinelearning.StudentsshouldusetheInternetproperly.（十二）为增强安全意识，你们学校英语俱乐部将开展“如何提升自我保护能力”的讨论。假如你是LiMing，你在美国的朋友Danny刚好发邮件跟你讨论这一问题，请你给他回一封邮件。词数100左右。内容要点:1.自我保护的重要性；2.你的具体建议；3.期待回信。注意事项:1.必须包含所有内容要点；开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。DearDanny,I'mgladtohearfromyou.Nomatterwhatwedo，itisthemostimportanttolearntoprotectourselves._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing【范文赏析】DearDanny,12学科网（北京）股份有限公司I'mgladtohearfromyou.Nomatterwhatwedo,itisthemostimportanttolearntoprotectourselves.Well,Ihavesomesuggestions.First,weshouldrespectteachersandtheelders,andatthesametime,weneedtogetonwellwithourclassmates.Secondly,behavewellinpublicanddon'trunaftereachother.Thirdly,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyontheInternet.Weshouldn'tgiveourexactpersonalinformationtothem.Lastbutnotleast,it'simportantforustoeatmorehealthyfoodandobeythetrafficrules.Ithinkitisveryimportantforustolearnsomewaystoprotectourselvesfromdanger.Ihopethesuggestionsabovemayhelpyou.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours,LiMing（十三）某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为“Howtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparents”的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇100个词左右的英语短文参加此次活动:1.父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;2.你对这些问题的看法;3.你与父母保持良好关系的做法。HowtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparentsInmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowmetogoout...【范文赏析】HowtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparentsInmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowmetogooutwithmyfriendsatnight.Theydon’tallowmetochoosemyownclothes,either.Andtheypaytoomuchattentiontomyexamresults.Ithinkmyparentsdon’tquiteunderstandme.However,Itrymybesttounderstandthem.Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandgivemetoomuchpressure,Iknowthatitisbecausetheyreallylovemeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.Inordertokeepagoodrelationshipwithmyparents,Istudyhard,listentothem,talktothemasfriends,tellthemmytroubles,andhelpthemdomorehousework.12学科网（北京）股份有限公司（十四）家是爱的港湾，每个家庭的结构都不太一样，家庭生活也不尽相同。请你以“MyFamilyLife”为题写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1．简单介绍你的家庭结构；2．介绍家庭成员之间的相处方式，并举例说明(1～2点)；3．你对你的家庭生活的评价。作文要求：1．不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。2．语句连贯，词数100个左右。作文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。MyFamilyLife____________________________________________________________________________【范文赏析】MyFamilyLifeIhaveafunandhappyfamily.Therearethreepeopleinmyfamily,myparentsandme.Mydadisalwaysstrictwithmeonmylessons.Atweekends，heoftenasksmetodomoreexerciseafterIhavefinishedthehomework.Andheoftenhelpsmeworkoutthedifficultproblems.Withhishelp，Iusuallystudywellatschool.ThoughIloseplentyoftimetoplay，Ifeelitmeaningful.SoIamgratefultomydad.Mymumisahousewife.Sheiskindtome.Forexample，whenIhavedonemyhomeworkforalongtimeatnight，shewillcometomyroomquietlywithacupofcoffee.Thecoffeecanwarmmeup.Moreimportantly，Ifeelwarmatthattime.Inshort，myfamilyispeacefulandmakesmefeelcomfortable.Andmyparentsteachmealot.Theyaremyteachersaswellasfriends.Ienjoymyfamilylife.（十五）养成良好的生活习惯和学习习惯，对于我们每一位学生成长很有帮助．请根据提示要点用英语写一篇词100左右的短文，发表在学校网站上。提示要点：（一）良好的生活和学习习惯包括：1）在生活方面：①健康饮食②经常锻炼③利用好时间2）在学习方面：①课前预习②认真听讲③独立作业（二）良好习惯带来的益处包括:1）帮助我们更好的学习知识；12学科网（北京）股份有限公司2）使我们提高技能，学会自我控制。（三）谈谈你的感受作文要求：1.表达中必须包含所给提示要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；2.词数100左右，开关已经写好，不计入总词数；3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。AGoodHabit,aSuccessfulSchoolLifeAhabitissomethingthatyoudooftenorregularlyalmostwithoutthinking,especiallysomethingthatishardtostopdoing.________________________________________【范文赏析】AGoodHabit,aSuccessfulSchoolLifeAhabitissomethingthatyoudooftenorregularlyalmostwithoutthinking,especiallysomethingthatishardtostopdoing.Inourdailylife,weoughttokeepahealthydiet．Also,it’snecessaryforustoexercisealot．Andweshouldlearntomakegooduseofourtime．Inourschoollife,weshouldpreparewellforeachlesson．Inclass,wemustlistentotheteachercarefully．Besides,it’simportantforustodoourhomeworkonourown.Inaword,goodhabitscanhelpuslearnthingsbetterandimproveourskills．Wecanlearntocontrolourselvesifwehavegoodhabits．Ithinkgoodhabitsarereallygoodforourmindandbody.12学科网（北京）股份有限公司12学科网（北京）股份有限公司